Thursday, June 11, 2009

Out in the rain!



Out in the rain!



In this damp weather I feel,
To take a note of what thy see...


In this sky of clouds soo full,
wonder what's more mirky I or thee...


In this vocal thunder's roar,
A cute girl's heart went sour...


In this flashy lightning's spree,
just wanna make some tea,
toss some ginger and a bit spice,
make all my folks rejoice...


In this dripping rain, gentle and small,
wanna drench, relive thy senses all...


In this nature's own sweet paradise,
with a real friend down the aisle,
laughing, joking, pushing, pulling ,
having d fun of a lifetime....

In this damp weather I feel,
To take a note of what thy see...

--- Vinit Asher

3 comments:

  1. with the thunders, howling and growling...
    with the lightening striking and smiling...
    with little kids, laughing and jumping...
    how i miss those days, giggling and playing...

    OMG u have bcome one good poet...
    good going...cheers!!!

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  2. Good work vinit....! I would like to add 2 lines by saying... Ab milti nahi hain wo bacpan ki tarah fursat... jab milti hain fursat tab ati nahi barish...!
    Cheers lole... good work really.

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